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[Madness Monsterfication]

cool weed

juanford66 responds:

thanks budy.

[Madness Re-Organization: Episode 1]

What the fuck,why is this animation only got 3 pages of comments?
The story building is pretty good,i like what ya did with the BGs,very...you?idk,that was my feel lol.
For the dialogues,this it would better if ya give each bois a color of it own,or show the name of who are currently talking by then,im only see ya did it in the end of the animation,but only with Ceres and Dione,while kept the same with other bois.
Anyway,im sharing this work to the other now,cuz this my friend,is a hidden gem.

HarryDeeGunman responds:

Aw, come on! It's not that big of a deal. Thanks anyway! I appreciate your comment!

[Project D3L@M]

Dude, even if it's the begining don't just copy someone's else work, even if your first animation is crappy I would appricate it more if it wasn't a rip-off of someone else's work.
Also,it a rip off, not unoriginal
dont want to said harsh about ya work,but rating is rating,i cant said stuff that aint truth about my feel

kingX0 responds:

i understand now, thank you, i'm afraid that your comment, might happen more...just you telling that, thanks, i don't think i'm gonna change if the time comes, you know.

[Beyond the Fog: Episode 1 - A Rude Awakening]

damn what a hot stuff ya got there,the music is amazing,the animation is good(despite i see some choppy one like when he climbing the ladder,2 frames for me) voice actor is also good too
,some sounds effects is missing tho,like when the fire balls get shot,im expect to hear some far away "chiuuu"sound effects,but there were none
good start,expect to see more from this series

9Hammer responds:

Thank you for the critique! Will definitely take into consideration going forward with the series.

[Discharge.fla]

well,i give ya 3 star cuz some problem with this boi and give ya some tips:
ya animation is quite stiff,as it doesnt have bouncy much(that not mean i ask u to be bouncy as kryy lol)and the body rotation doesnt have any easing to it,if ya dont know what easing it,ask burtjack,but here a quick easy tip for easing: from slow to fast and from fast to slow,but this tip dont apply to sudden movement such as: surprise,punch,.. so yea,remember to easing stuff so it could be more watchable
the creativity is well... someone gonna said something for it,for now,im only focus on animation.
the tween need easing too,ya know that ya can easing them right?
overall 6.5/10 still watchable,almost enjoyable but still got some flaws to it,i think ya should do abit of walking test,reaction test and idleling test(when ya want ya character to stay the same place but still make him look lively)
(try watching timelapse and strealm from ya farvorite madness animators,it might help u find da wae

Prov22 responds:

Well, smoothness was always my main enemy lol. Anyway I will try to improve as always.
Thanks for this big response. I apperciate constructive feedback.

[RCP Madness | S01E03 | Aggravation]

welp,here my review on ya movie:
first is about animation obvious,while ya been improve,i still cant be call that good,but,i seen worse(look at classic collab) yep,i seen a hella worse,so ya stuff is decent
second is the story phasing:about the whole series,it make zero sense at all lol,first one look like your everyday madness animation,but your OC die in the end,and the second is try to be zombie apocalypse,and now in the third ep,the big guy,who have wounded from the second movie,beat those grunt and agent who suppose to be le big boi allies?and the ya OC back to life without explaination?madness combat 3 even tho hank being revived by a bunch of bandages,atleast krinkelz show how he got revived,and continue from that,and about this ep alone,the story phase is too fast and it confuse the viewer,i have to rewatch all of your eps from this series and watch it a second time to know that my efforts being wasted,next time,pls consider how each eps should connect and how it should be explain
about the your revived OC,i know u want to make it look mysterious and all,but it not work,atleast for me
the BG music and the sfx are one of the few good thing about this animation,i dont know who made the BG music(probably you) but if u borrow it,pls credit the one who made it.
that why i give only three star,cause it a decent movie,not good,but it decent,and even tho i dont enjoy the story much,i do enjoy the animation and the little fight with another mag agent
also,the after credit scene should be put before the credit scene,as it act like it not a spoiler or a hint to the next movie(a cliff hanger).
-thece

RoetCarPower responds:

Well the posters have some story.
I don't see any OC being revived, dude. they are all different characters, lol.
The "big boi" is not an ally to the grunts or agents. only Hawk who he met in contamination.
Credit scene is yes a bit shit. I didn't know what i was doing.
I did credit the music authors thank you very much, lol.
I don't have to put them in description if they are already in the credits scene.
"lol"
-Roet

[Time to Madness Part05]

welp,i see from ep 1 to here,and.....well,what can i said,gud job man
this part have some familiar with realm tbh(this is ma opinion) and here some similar point i see:
le doctor but this time actually useful
Rathrak(the main protagonist) and Rathrak(the anti protagonist) both have come from the tube(now i think about it,the point i just made is stupid cause where else can he come from,the sewer?)
the boi (A-P Rathrak) being posses by the book(i actually dont know if the book posses him or he still have the control over his body and the book just act like an upgrade for that boy or not) similiar to Huffman August,which being possessed not by a book,but a demon.(i dont know if this count as a familiar point lol)
A-P Rathrak very strong,and stronger after "receive" the book,like yeetlon but actually use his own power than fire and flying and stuff.
that all the point i find lol.
welp,for animation,it's smooth but also fast pace,im like that alot.
the agent actually show their skillz and not being a meat shield like every madness animation ever.
some joke are funny,but the "to be continued" joke drag on quite long,so that why im giving u 4.5
also no casings this time,cause.....why?
9.5 this meme series is getting real,also expect to see the finale of this series.

Djjaner responds:

The Book = Necronomicon (How to prof gained, you see in the next episode.)
Main Protagonist = Dave
Second Protagonist = Rathrak (named according to the source code)

[Madness Adlational]

from slow to fast pace,i am sure that you are slowly improve lol
nice movie

Bu4jEnke3 responds:

You will see my fastness in future. Dont worry

[Madness Conclusion]

this is.....fair?
like,you forgot to give kelzad his lazer beam tho...
and you forgot gavriel power up coffe.....
and gib can teleport his katana outta his hand.....
......
there alot of think you forgot tho.....
but this fight is more....reasonable then headshot everyone in GPS,i think......
well,you two have been kill in the animation too soooo,fair?
also,dont take too hard on this one Djjaner
that all i could said.
ya sinners.

Kenamy responds:

smh it's was the whole purpose that everyone use their hands and fists,
and we called ourselves "cheaters", so obviously it's a joke on everything.

now get outta here

[Chasm.fla]

here a tip for tweening:dont let it there,you need to ease it
those rock could be better if you easing it from fast to slow
anyway,good animation make in two days

Prov22 responds:

Thanks dude!